Vibe
**This was written for the 7th Poetry Carnival, hosted by Garnet with the theme "music".**
Vibe
In the dark I am one of many, fingers to lips just so,
exhaling my melody into the throbbing, smoke-filled room
where bodies warm with swaying nodding tapping lilt behind
the meter of the spotlit island's tight blue cadence.
Ice clinks in short glasses while I tap my thumb;
frosted ashtrays slowly fill with perfectly timed conversations.
My words scat along the bar now, rythmic and stacatto;
my heart pounds, crescendoing, in twos and fours
trading eights with yours across the table.
4 comments:
i see you live in seattle. All that i have to say is that Spokane is better.*cocieted grin*
Cool poem BTW
Very nice!
Trebuchet- the rhythm clinks like the ice. and I love the last two lines! well done. perfect poem for the carnival. thank you.
G
Thanks, friends! Garnet - you did a fantastic job of hosting. Thanks for the fun challenge and kind words. :)
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